ReclusiveOne's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Character Design 01]

Needs work.

The faces to the left look pretty good, but the girl's body is very poorly drawn. Work a little more on anatomy and three-quarter perspective. The biggest problem I have, by far, is that her legs look deformed and severely broken. The upper half of her torso, though, is solid, but her bikini bra straps look as if they should be bending outward rather than inward.

Otherwise, you do a good job with faces that are facing the viewer, keep it up.

KazamiKeitaro responds:

Thank you so much for the review. i'll be sure to study up more on anatomy this month. :)

[A fiery encounter.]

I don't know why, but I really like this one. Your use of focal blurring creates a very interesting effect that I feel makes the image more "warm" and more akin to real fire. If you made an animation with this character, I'd definitely watch it.

ZaneLittle responds:

Thank you very much! I would definitely consider animating this! Thanks for the feedback!