Pretty good. The edges are a bit rough, though.
The faces to the left look pretty good, but the girl's body is very poorly drawn. Work a little more on anatomy and three-quarter perspective. The biggest problem I have, by far, is that her legs look deformed and severely broken. The upper half of her torso, though, is solid, but her bikini bra straps look as if they should be bending outward rather than inward.
Otherwise, you do a good job with faces that are facing the viewer, keep it up.
Thank you so much for the review. i'll be sure to study up more on anatomy this month. :)
I really don't know what to say about this. For starters please improve your technique, I can hardly tell what I'm looking at here. Also, the one on the right (I'll assume that he's Kai) has this appendage attached to lower half of his body and I have no idea what the hell it's supposed to be (I really don't think that it's his dick or one of his legs). The perspective is broken, the line-work is atrocious, and the left half of the image is blurry and washed out. Unlike the last guy, I don't really care if you draw furry porno, but you have to understand that the quality of this drawing is unacceptable. It's a lot better than "Furry Bad" so you might have some potential, but you need to practice more.
Oh ok. Least, you were being honestly about it. Aswell, thank you. Yeah, Kai is the one on the right.
Heh, never figured you for a Two Kinds fan. Personally didn't care for the comic that much, but I read Jack and Better Days so I won't throw stones from that glass house. Once again, though, you fail to disappoint me with your drawings. My only complaint here is the background. I really wish you would add just as much shading and detail as you do to your characters.
I don't know why, but I really like this one. Your use of focal blurring creates a very interesting effect that I feel makes the image more "warm" and more akin to real fire. If you made an animation with this character, I'd definitely watch it.
Thank you very much! I would definitely consider animating this! Thanks for the feedback!
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